Moving Forward

is what I usually use. They have some good ones that help you think of plots.

I liked how the main character new exactly how long it took the step-father to get to her on various occasions. I also liked the description of how her mother ...

I'm a lefty. Scissors aren't a big problem for me if they are modern scissors. The old clunky metal ones just don't work..it's not that my hands don't fit, it's ...

Although Jane knew how her son’s tantrum could go bad, The 'how' throws me off. Instead, you could say she knew 'that' it could go bad. If you say how, ...

Take a 360 degree scope of the room surrounding. This last two words felt odd to me. Maybe you could rephrase it as 'your surroundings' or 'your room's surroundings'. Even ...

This was good! I liked that you got straight to the point and didn't waste time elaborating on details. I didn't notice any glaring mistakes, and that's always a good ...

If anyone had choosen differently, I'd have to be defending the rights of purebloods, however, it's the muggleborns we have chosen to out. The first 'choosen' should be 'chosen'. Muggleborns ...